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Hi Afeefah. This short story is absolutely amazing. I really enjoyed reading it! My favourite bit was when the branches lashed out breaking that guys neck. It's really original and ...

Wow you're story so far is just so action packed and exciting. I really enjoyed reading it especially the motorbike scene. Sadly the plot seems a little old and worn. ...

Hi, I read you short werewolf story and found it rather predictable. For a start there was no surprise about him becoming a werewolf because of the title and what ...

I have to say it's a little bit confusing and jumpy. It's quite hard to work out who's talking but the plot so far is brilliant and I like the ...

I'm confused. -Have the humans of earth taken their inter-world war out into space? -Why is it the Royal Navy? Shouldn't it be Air Force or Space Force etc? Despite ...

Well done I like your poem its really strong and bold with emotion but like someone else said i suggest that you make a little less blunt and take some ...

This is amazing! I'm so glad you reviewed mine and asked me to review yours because if you hadn't I would never of have found it because I don't normally ...

I'm really liking the sound of the story so far as it already talks of betrayal, vampires magic potions, war and in general lots of exciting things. Sadly i think ...

Is there more because I'm addicted to this [b]beginning? It's just so amazing you just have to write and post more! Make this a prologue or a chapter one! I'm ...

I really like idea of being merely a head which is trapped in a jar in a labritory whith the cruel ,bad guy, has great potential for a real chilling ...